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    Writing for the Hell of it.

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    Post by Guest Sat Nov 27, 2010 10:33 pm

    So Knickerless and I were bored this one time and thus our blog was created Grin

    I write a lot, normally on my own. It's a lot of fun to do it with someone else (apart from having to WAIT for them to DO IT Grr ).

    The rest of my stuff might be posted some day in the-
    Okay, never.
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    Post by Rhosauce Sun Nov 28, 2010 6:38 pm

    I like it so far. It needs some editing (for example, using the same word twice in as many sentences - "underneath" in the nearest entry) but other than that, I enjoy it.

    By the way, why did Ed wrap his arms around your protagonist, Red? I didn't quite get that. Was it to calm you?

    Oh, and a suggestion for naming the entries: Why not have the name of your protagonist and then simply put "Part I" or "Part II" etc? At least then we'd know who is writing which entry.
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    Post by IngoSmith Mon Nov 29, 2010 7:39 pm

    adressing someone in a layup its noral to put both hands on their shoulders. its reassuring and focuses them on the fact they are being addressed so they don't have to turn around.

    hugging...maybe not so much a done thing. other than that i like it thus far

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